Your academic record is quite impressive

October 11, 2011

John Harrison

1234 Main Court

Santa Cruz • CA, 95060

Cell: 257-777-8989

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Dear John Harrison,

We received your application for a scholarship at the Graduate School Department of San Isidro State University. We sincerely appreciate your interest.

Your academic record is quite impressive and your extracurricular activities give you an edge over the other candidates. However, we regret to inform you that the scholarship has been granted to someone else who has a wider experience in the industry. Considering that you are a few years younger than the others who are also applying, I encourage you to gain more experience and expose yourself more to different challenges and situations in the corporate world. This will greatly benefit your qualifications the next time you apply for the same scholarship. Well wishes to you, and we look forward to having you as a scholar in our school in the future.



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