I have read the proposal of moving one of the Zane subsidiaries

December 14, 2011

HENNERY SMITH

2365, S Mayfield Ave

Chicago, IL 60652

Cell: (123)-555-1234

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Dear HENNERY SMITH,

I have read the proposal of moving one of the Zane subsidiaries from Blueridge to Bluevale. However, I have a few concerns on this plan. First of all, if we move the subsidiary to Greenvale, which is 350 miles closer to our main office, it will still result to the same benefits. Secondly, labor cost is cheaper at Greenvale by $2.00 which will result in around $400,000 in annual savings. Lastly, Greenvale offers lower corporate taxes compared to those in the surrounding cities.

I am aware that the company might have weightier reasons to those I gave. But still, I just want to voice out my concerns. If you wish, we can discuss this further. Thank you for your time.

Sincerely,

Achit

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