I am impressed with your presentation the other day

December 13, 2011

David Harris

609 West Main Street

Albuquerque

New Mexico, 87109

Cell: 237-409-0198

 

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Dear David Harris,

I am impressed with your presentation the other day. Your visual tools were really effective, however, I wish to comment on one thing. Some of the jokes you used were not appropriate for the audience. Even though they are funny, green jokes should not be used in a business presentation. The audience might get offended. There are many wholesome jokes that you can use to lighten the mood of your presentation without being offensive to others.

Sincerely,

Walburga

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