Last April 30, I sent my loan application form to your office,

November 11, 2011

Jimy Ortan,
1234, West 67 Street,
Carlisle, MA 01741,
(123)-456 7890.

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Dear Jimy Ortan,,

Last April 30, I sent my loan application form to your office, together with the requirements as listed in your website. It was received by one of your bank personnel, Jean Hayes, who told me that it would be handed over to the authorized bank officers. However, I have not received any calls or letters until now. While I understand that you might still be in the process of credit investigation, I would like to be sure that the application has actually been received by the persons-in-charge.

Would it be possible for you to update me on the status of my application? Also, if you could give me some information on the expected date of release, I would appreciate it very much.

Sincerely,
Harith

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