I have the results of my research on the products

November 6, 2011

Richard Anderson

1234, West 67 Street

Carlisle, MA 01741

123)-456 7890.

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Dear Richard Anderson,

I have the results of my research on the products you gave me last week. I think I have done a thorough job and have conclusive answers for you.

The She brand nail polish went on smooth and the color was great but it dried really slowly. It began chipping after only a day of ordinary wear. I would rate this one a 4 on our current rating scale.

The Hensal brand polish streaked on the first coat. However, the second coat went on smoothly and beautifully and the color was vibrant. It dried quickly and was very shiny. It wore for 5 days without chipping which is what the manufacturer promised. I would rate it an 8.

The Egomaniac went on like glass, dried quickly and did not even need a second coat. The color was really nice and lasted 5 days without chipping. I would rate it a 9.5, losing half a point because the cost is very high.

With all the research, its obvious the Egomaniac nail polish stood up to our most important criteria.

This was a fun research project and I hope you will consider me for others in the future.



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