1234, West 67 Street,
Carlisle, MA 01741,
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Dear Jimy Ortan,,
Do workouts and have fun at the same time.
Renew your membership at BodyFit Center for as low as $85. You still get to enjoy all the benefits that you did before at a lower price.
PLEASE GIVE US A RESPONSE BEFORE APRIL 30 AND SAVE UP TO $10.
The BodyFit Center would like to offer its former members a chance to renew the membership for just $85. That is $10 less than the usual rate. You not only get to save money, you will also have a chance to avail of all the privileges that only members can enjoy. The BodyFit Center has many new and exciting offers for its members this season. We have brand-new and up-to date workout equipments. We also have new workout routines as well. Working out at BodyFit Center is much more fun and exciting with the new classes that we have. Enclosed with this letter is a list of all the activities and classes that you might wish to join.
Renewal of membership has never been this easy. You do not even have to go to our center. All you have to do is to fill up the Renewal Form that we attached to this letter. You also have the option to go online and process your renewal at our new website. It is that easy and hassle-free. In addition to that, we offer the $85 worth membership renewal with a 30-day money-back guarantee. That means that if you are not satisfied with our services, you can cancel your trial within the 30-day period and we will give you the full refund.
So hurry and renew your membership before our promo ends!