We recently received your application

October 12, 2011

Joseph Hall
1902, X Street, Madison Avenue,
Los Angeles, CA-90001
(123) 456-7890

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Dear Joseph Hall,

 

We recently received your application for a credit card from All Star Finance. Unfortunately we were unable to proceed with the application as you credit profile does not match our criteria. We are most concerned about your employment status and a number of outstanding loans nominated to you.

Should you have relevant information pertaining to these two matters we will be willing to reassess your application. Please forward any information to: All Star Finance – Credit Department 245 King Street Winston, Oklahoma 59584

 

Sincerely,

Bodor

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