Better professional development opportunities

July 29, 2011

Andrew Hall
456, X Street, Y Avenue,
Philadelphia, PA-19103
(123) 456-7890


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Dear Andrew Hall,

Your last letter really makes it sound that you are having a bad time at work. I can understand why this would be, the lack of a pay rise this year is certainly not something to inspire a good worker. I know that you have always worked hard and performed better than many of your colleagues, so monetary recognition would of course be nice.

You have indicated that you could move firms for more money. I know that it may be wrench to move from colleagues but moving firm doesn’t have to be the end of friendships formed at work. You will have no problem staying in touch with new friends, and will find new ones at a new firm. My personal opinion would be to go for this new position, you will have better professional development opportunities and more money as well.

We must get together soon and you can let me know what you finally decide upon.


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